Antun and Inajda are given food by their rescuers, (Xan Medani and Edith MehXian) and although relieved to have escaped the trail which killed their parents, both are in severe shock. (CLICK HERE for next chronological story)
Unbound Boxes Limping Gods: Disconnected Stories. Issue # 81: Antun Rekaya Part 3
These drawings complement your tale perfectly.
RR
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Your stories would make great movies!!
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Cheryl
Just a suggestion+++++++
I would write your sentence a little different–such as:
I settled back and rested my head against the wooden seat. Still chewing on her bread, Inadja cuddled up to me as if I’m her mother’s replacement.
Cheers
Grandpa
Kenny, you’re a well travelled and prolific writer, and I appreciate your constructive input. Thanks again for taking time to read, although I’ll keep it like it is for stylistic reasons đ All the best. Cheryl
Hi Cheryl,
Thanks so much for the recent blog follow. It led me to your blog, which I am now following. I love ‘meeting’ fellow writers.
I look forward to reading more of your work!
Nancy
Hi Nancy, yes it’s a very thought provoking time. Thanks also for visiting here, it’s good to meet you. Cheryl
Fantastic! The atmosphere and pace in this issue are perfect. And the close-up drawings are just right for letting the imagination wander. You right great adventure, Cheryl!
Thanks Richard, I’m glad you like this (as a longer story gives more away than I’m used to) Looking forward to posting the final issue in this set, and then it’s on to shorter stories again. (I don’t want to give too much away!) I always get jumpy with these longer stories for some reason.
Sorry I’ve not been by in a while. I’ve be travelling for a little while and only just getting back to ‘desk life’. It’s always such wonderful entertainment over here. I think your skills are wonderful!
Hi, Gabriela, I hope your trip went well and you had a good time. Glad you’re back safely, and thanks for reading.
I envy and admire you folks who can write and illustrate. Great stuff!
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Cheryl, love the story and how it is unfolding… I also wish to express my gratitude and appreciation for your support of my pages and sharing yours.http://iamforchange.wordpress.com/awards-page-and-nominations-thank-you-i-am-so-honored-and-grateful/ So many have shared so much with me and I wish to share as well please accept my nominations and if nothing else know I am grateful for your sharing on your pages with us all and the time you share with me on mine.Thank you!! đ Joe
Thanks so much Joe, I’ll add you to my thankies page! Cheryl
AGREE wholeheartedly with ericjbaker’s comments you are an all around talent. Fabulous!
Thank you, that means a lot đ
You are very good at visualizing the emotions of your characters with your drawings.
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