After agreeing to sail to Maryland, (to retrieve an important artefact for Field Marshal Panak) in exchange for the safety of her daughters, (Alexand and Heyem) Inajda Rekaya is nearing her journey’s end. CLICK HERE for next chronological story.
Unbound Boxes Limping Gods: Disconnected Stories. Issue # 98: The Unbound Box Part 2
I love that in six short paragraphs I’m compelled to know what happens for the rest of the story. This is a great example of hooking a reader. The characters have very individual personalities that make them dynamic, human, and easy to care about even after reading only a short section. Love, love, love.
Hi Mandy, thank you so much, I’m glad you’re enjoying Inajda’s story!
Hi Cheryl! Yes, this is the beginning of a novel, surely. The pace is just wonderful – I really liked the way it unwound and I can’t wait to read the next part. In one short paragraph you got me hooked on Professor Sumian. Wonderful drawing as always.
Hi Richard, thank you! Yes I thought it’s about time to give Anesidor Sumian a bigger story. Can’t wait to release her next week!
Yay!
Cheryl – I’m with Richard. You hooked me and have me hanging on waiting for more. Of course, I couldn’t possibly say enough good things too do your drawings justice.
Hi Sheri, thank you! I’m so glad I shared this story with you, it’s one that has been waiting a long time, and I always enjoy writing for Inajda.
Yes, very interesting part. And you draw them all, don’t you? That must be taking a lot of time. It’s so amazing when I think how I’m buried in all duties which never end. Everything always comes first, and I get to doing what I like when I’m absolutely tired. You’re really creating great stories, thanks, enjoyed!
Thank you 😀
hanks for continuing to read my blog. I find it hard to locate “older: post of your that I havent read at times-I would like to read more, I will keep looking! beebeesworld
You’re welcome Beebee, and likewise, thank you!
heh. I was born in New Jersey. I grew up in New Jersey. I find it funny that people all over the world think of it as a “hell-hole”. 🙂